Art Trade with a fish

So a good long time ago I did an art trade with Ellie!
She told me to draw in the style of One Piece (Eiichiro Oda).
The whole point is I have to imitate his style as much as I can!
so.. I did a comic page on Sweet Lime...again..
ERR I had A HARD TIME DOING THIS
I think I'm done but IDK? I should be working on another piece but gimme opinion please.

terrible doodles

I have so many unfinished pieces on my desktop for this blog!
I have been busy busy busy lately.
But everyday I go here and just stare wishing I had something to post..so
I did this in about 10 minutes .. yes.. it's so bad but it's something.
this literally happened 20 minutes ago